Friday, January 4, 2013

Creepypasta #3: The school "lock-in"

I'm a middle schooler. A normal middle schooler. We had a person with a gun come in during a school day last week and everyone is still scared about it today. Eric Jamington was the only kid who died. Today I'm staying for one of those school lock-ins where its like a sleepover, but at school. I'm with my 2 friends Even and Zach. We find a spot in the gym and we put our sleeping bags down so we can go do some stuff around the school. We go to the computer lab and go on the 3 near computers that are on. Evens and Zachs were working fun except mine. It had trouble getting to the internet, every time I tried I got a error code of 3€!1/ which I don't know what it means. Weird. It's 12:32 am and we deside to go to sleep.

I wake and check my phone, 2:43 am. Every one in the gym is asleep. I get hungry so I stand up and head to the cafateria. While I'm walking I look at the walls and I see a lot of things, but what catches my eye is this: my friend Devin's locker. He had a note sticking out of it so I went up, grabbed it and I red it. It was this: $%_=w®®©]¢h€\=#y. I hear a loud bang behind me and I turn around to see nothing. "Go back to sleep" I turn around to see someone far away on the other side of the hallway. I start to run up the nearest stairs to get away, as I hear fast foot stops behind me. I finally find an elevator, thinking I can go and protect my self in there. I quickly run up and try to open the elevator door but its taking too long. The thing is quickly running towards me as I finally get the elevator open and I run in and close it. Wondering what to do, I press the button to go to the cafeteria, the basement.

As the elevator moves it stops at the 1st floor, as I'm wondering why I stop the elevator starts shakeing. I hear loud screams outside the elevator door as the lights flicker on and off really fast. All of a suddon, right when the door opens, everything stops. Victoria, one of my friends, runs in and quickly pushes the door close button. She noticed me and quickly came over to me and started crying on my shoulder. She sqeezes my hand and lets out a scream when the elevator stops at the basement. Before the door opens I ask quickly "Victoria, what happen!? What's wrong?!!" "I don't know! Just something was out there! I was getting a drink and it was just there, across the hallway, looking at me! I started running and was about to get caught in tell I got to the elevator! And now I'm with you but that thing, it was just..."*sob*she replies. We exit the elevator, now in the cafeteria as she is still crying and holding on to me for dear life. We sit down in the kitchen and I try to settle her down. "It's OK, your going to be alright. We just need to find a way to get away from that thing. We will be all right, don't worry..." All of a suddon...

3:14 am. Seems like i just blacked out, Victoria is up against the wall crying. Her shirt is ripped and scratch marks are all over her back. There is a single scratch mark on my hand. I go over to her and ask if she is OK and she says: "Huh? Yea I'm OK, I think. That thing came in and did this to me. We need to get out of this school...NOW!!!" As she screamed a loud bang was hurd outside. We try to run and there is shaking, a tiny earthquake. We quickly run to the gym to see that nobody was there. A chunk of ceiling falls and nearly crushes us, but we manage to dodge it. All of a suddon Victoria gets pulled away by nothing, as she is pulled into a pitch black room. All I see is a pair of blood red eyes, clear as day, so clear that it looks like HD. It slowly closes as the eyes keep staring at me. I slowly go to the door and try to open it, scared out of my witts, but it won't budge. Then, the door opens slowly, nothing but black. All of a suddon I hear "!niaga ffuts ym htiw yalp t'nod" and with a loud gust of wind Victoria launches towards me, pushing me back against the wall behind me.

We quickly run to the door going outside but the doors are locked. My friend Evan comes behind us in fear, he says he can't find Zach, but he has the keys to get out. All of a suddon we hear Zach scream in terror. We run to try to find him, running through the hallways, all the way to floor that's been unused for 14 years. Floor 4. As we get to floor 4, we see dolls all over the ground. Half the kids from the school lock-in were there, hanged by ropes, looked like they were dead. "ZACH!!!" Zach...he was there, with them, on the ceiling. We fled in terror after hearing screaming. The screaming was horrible. Like nails on a chalk board, but 10 times worse. We ran as fast as we could to the nearest door to the outside world.

We get to the front door and Evan gets the key out and unlocks the door. The screaming gets louder as we see multiple middle schoolers we never met before, just standing in our way."What are you doing?!!" We say as they still stand there. We push them to the side and we run off to the football field. The screaming has stopped, everything was silent, intell. RINNNGGGG!!! My phone starts going off, I'm getting a phone call from someone. I answer it and what I hear is static and heavy breathing. I put on speaker so Evan and Victoria can hear it. Then we start hearing some piano music. It sounds dark and slow, a really dreary feeling is coming to us now. But then we snap up when everything goes silent and all we hear is Zach screaming. The line goes dead as the call ends.

Now we see Victoria, she starting to bleed really badly. She said she got sliced really badly by one of those kids that were blocking us. We hear Zach screaming back at the school. Evan goes back to save Zach while I go back in to get medical supplies. When I come out Victoria was laying on the ground bleeding really badly. I quickly try to do all I can, to make sure she stays alive. Everything is getting black, something is happening... getting dizzy...seeing faces...must help.......her....I...di...d.....it........

*One week later*
Well I saved her, she was going to die but I did it, and I couldn't be happier then now. Because of me saving her life I'm now dating her, and I promise now matter what kind of situation, I will protect her. Schools back in session after the whole lock-in incedent. Evan came out alive, (Still with 4 blood marks) but Zach didn't. As Evan explains it: "When I ran out after seeing Zach die, I saw you blacked out, and Victoria stiched up, kinda doing little spazing out motions right next to you. I carefully carried both of you to the nearest shelter for a rest. As I look back to the school while I was leaving with you, I saw a girl, staring at me through the 3rd floor window. She had a boyish-like doll with her. It was disturbing, but I'm happy we are still alive, but sad that those other people didn't survive. I wonder who did all of this..."

2 comments:

  1. I really like your story, but my only problem is that it could use better grammer and spelling.

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  2. Thank you for your comment. Though I haven't really updated this blog in a while, I plan on updating this Creepypasta with better grammar and such. Again thanks for the feedback.

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